Class 10, October 23

 By Nate Feldman

Point by Point vs. Block Method Comparison Essays

Point by Point

Thesis: New York and Philadelphia have many similarities

*The first similarity is their diversity.  New York and Philadelphia both have multicultural societies made up of people from every culture around the world. 

*The second similarity is their passion for sports.  New York sports fans are well-known as being very enthusiastic and passionate.  Likewise, Philadelphia fans are some of the most aggressive and boisterous people in the country.

 

Block

Thesis: New York and Philadelphia have many similarities

New York is one of the largest metropolitan regions in the country.  In it, you can find people from all backgrounds, including all nationalities, ethnicities, and religions.

Philadelphia, likewise, is a major metropolitan area with millions of people.  Like New York, you can find people of all backgrounds living here throughout the city.

 

Thesis: New York and Philly have both similarities and differences.

New York and Philly are similar because……….

New York and Philly are different because…….


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